Poetry Tips: Park Benches

This week I couldn’t help but notice the weather has been warmer and the people sitting on benches waiting for the bus or in the parks have come alive compared to being huddled in jackets. This week I want you to try writing poems dedicated to benches and the people using them. I’ve also provided a link to a poem about Central Park for inspiration on the subject. Good luck to all of you who try it!

http://poetryfoundation.org/archive/poem.html?id=171587
“Retired Ballerinas, Central Park West” by Lawrence Ferlinghetti


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Rope-A-Dope Open Submissions

You better act fast because the open submissions for chapbooks closes on March 31st at Rope-A-Dope press! Include two copies of your original manuscript, 15-35 pages, and include two title pages for EACH copy of your manuscript. The first title page should have your contact information and the title, the second title page should feature the title only. Include a Self-Addressed Stamped Envelope and mail them to the editors to:

Golden Gloves Chapbook Series
Rope-a-Dope Press
516 East 2nd Street #42
South Boston, MA 02127

Please check out the site and the details by clicking the link below and good luck to all of you who submit:

http://rope-a-dope-press.blogspot.com/2008/11/open-submissions-february-march-2009.html


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Poems Found by Poet Hound

http://apt.aforementionedproductions.com/nineteen/townsend1.htm
“The Elegy: Cherry Blossom” by Beth Townsend

http://poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/20447
“Not Ideas About the Thing But the Thing Itself” by Wallace Stevens


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Poiesis 2 Review

Alternating Current's biannual literary magazine, Poiesis, was released back in January and once I started reading it, I couldn’t put it down. There are over fifty poets featured, some of which have been featured in Poet Hound before such as Hosho McCreesh, Justin Barrett, Leah Angstman, and Timothy Gager. The collection of poems is as diverse as the writers and you are sure to find more than several poems you’ll want to make copies of to share with your friends, family, and co-workers. Each issue has a Featured Writer who happens to be J.J. Campbell in this issue and when I read his poems I said “I like this guy!” So let me start out by sharing one of his poems below:

my fellow man

often as i watch the seconds aimlessly
tick away each day as i wait for my
number to be called certain thoughts
will enter my head

like how my fellow man could ever
allow reality tv to become popular

or how my fellow man could ever let a
government of the people, for the people
and by the people become so corrupt and
hell bent on greed and ruling through fear

when did my fellow man become
a member of the religious right

how did my fellow man
forget the one rule for this planet

keep the rich rich
and the poor poor

why did my fellow man allow the
schools to rot into ruin and suddenly
become naïve and think raising a
collective voice would change
anything, anything at all

my fellow man must have missed
the memo about the almighty dollar

but anytime i’m out there, waiting in
line, running a red light or pulling up
a chair at the bar next to my fellow man

it only takes me a few seconds to order
another drink, something stronger this
time, for the look on my fellow man
says it all

we’re fucking doomed

J.J. Campbell’s poem is very abrasive and visceral which I like because blunt people are my favorite type of people—you know exactly where you stand with them. All of his poems featured in this collection have the same visceral quality and you need a strong stomach to read them all.


Another poem not quite so abrasive but also blunt is one by Joseph Veronneau below:

An Artist’s Night Out

Entering the building, I could
see the academics sitting
stiffly in cushioned chairs.
I quietly filled a seat in the back
Amongst snob-nosed “professionals.”
The poet kept his wine glass
closer than his book of poems,
selling his words to us in monotone.
A delicate two-finger clap
to the palm and then silence –
for the English Professor wannabe-poet
is about to speak again.
After the last metaphor
and sentences of “grandmother’s
crisp apple pie,”
I was ready to leave.
I received a dirty look
on the way out
by the bookstore owners.
I was pleased because
I had finally received something
from the evening.

I congratulate Joseph Veronneau for being so candid about the poetry reading he describes. I can picture perfectly the scenario and know that I may have struggled internally whether to leave or not if it had been me but Mr. Veronneau walked out and was pleased with the dirty looks he received as a result which makes a great ending for this poem.


I will now share one final and more sentimental poem by Janice Brabaw:

Moshe

You were too young to love me
The way I thought I needed to be loved
And in the end I wasn’t enough
Too much
For you

I was too young to love you
The way you thought you needed to be loved
And in the end you weren’t enough
Too much
For me

Dusk does not settle
Without the dust
of our love
whispering across
floorboards
from under the floor.

And every night
Before I sleep
I have to sweep it back
So I can rest again.

This poem sounds like first young, true love that you can never be rid of. Most of us have that experience and I love the repetition of “wasn’t enough/Too much” for each other. I also like the idea of having to sweep back the feelings to rest peacefully at night, it makes the relationship in the poem more pronounced and like a fresh memory than an old wound. This poem avoids being trite on a topic we all read and write about and I think Janice Brabaw does a wonderful job with her choice of words.


There are countless more poems I could share with you but I think you should check out the collection for yourself.

To purchase a copy you may find it for $4.00 at the link below and I hope you’ll take a look:
http://alt-current.com/pp/pp_item.html#poiesis_issue_2

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Poems Worth Your Time

You know how you can drop in on Wednesdays to find links for all kinds of poems here? Well this site does it more often than I do and what a grand selection! These poems are worth your time and I hope you’ll check it out at:

http://poemsworthyourtime.wordpress.com/


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